Help with Holocaust essay?

Well first of all, I think you're a beautiful writer. You need to read it over for some grammar and spelling errors. If you're trying to write a conclusion, it's best to remember that it essentially repeats the introduction. You want to reintroduce your thesis statement (which is basically the most important sentence in your introduction, the one that tells the reader exactly what it is your saying - in this case, "But for Ludmile Page, this feeling didn't stay forever") and re-word it in your conclusion. That's the easiest way of writing a conclusion.